Comments on: How To Write Long Sentences http://www.novelr.com/2008/06/02/how-to-write-long-sentences Writing, Publishing and The Internet Wed, 28 Jul 2010 14:22:26 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 By: SAMAR http://www.novelr.com/2008/06/02/how-to-write-long-sentences/comment-page-1#comment-4866 SAMAR Thu, 01 Apr 2010 12:53:47 +0000 http://www.novelr.com/?p=162#comment-4866 i don't know because till date i not take your serveice i don’t know because till date i not take your serveice

]]> By: SAMAR http://www.novelr.com/2008/06/02/how-to-write-long-sentences/comment-page-1#comment-4865 SAMAR Thu, 01 Apr 2010 12:52:16 +0000 http://www.novelr.com/?p=162#comment-4865 My english writhing so lazy and poor i still write a english as a ten years child write so plz give see me way of good writing and we can't forget till my life i alway grip in subject, object, noun, pronous and others gramer but when ever i write hindi we can not thiks little more to write so I hope you will be help me. My english writhing so lazy and poor i still write a english as a ten years child write so plz give see me way of good writing and we can’t forget till my life i alway grip in subject, object, noun, pronous and others gramer but when ever i write hindi we can not thiks little more to write so I hope you will be help me.

]]> By: Eli James http://www.novelr.com/2008/06/02/how-to-write-long-sentences/comment-page-1#comment-2879 Eli James Sun, 19 Oct 2008 03:25:26 +0000 http://www.novelr.com/?p=162#comment-2879 Thanks for the kind words, Andre. =) Much appreciated. PS: I'm a bit busy at the moment, but trust me when I say I'm not happy with some of the articles I've written in the past. I need to re-edit once I get back from my studybreak. @Jeremy: good catch, thanks. Thanks for the kind words, Andre. =) Much appreciated.

PS: I’m a bit busy at the moment, but trust me when I say I’m not happy with some of the articles I’ve written in the past. I need to re-edit once I get back from my studybreak.

@Jeremy: good catch, thanks.

]]> By: André Fischer http://www.novelr.com/2008/06/02/how-to-write-long-sentences/comment-page-1#comment-2870 André Fischer Tue, 14 Oct 2008 13:12:08 +0000 http://www.novelr.com/?p=162#comment-2870 And I just noticed the first sentence above is missing an "is"... And I just noticed the first sentence above is missing an “is”…

]]> By: André Fischer http://www.novelr.com/2008/06/02/how-to-write-long-sentences/comment-page-1#comment-2869 André Fischer Tue, 14 Oct 2008 13:11:23 +0000 http://www.novelr.com/?p=162#comment-2869 Your point, excellently, praiseworthily made as it is, is, after many other posts and thought-provoking articles I have taken the time (of which I sadly don't have as much as I would like) to read, the one that has prompted me to sit back and, hands aflutter over the keyboard, attempt to construct an apposite, possibly worthy, and hopefully humorous (though what exactly "humour" is varies so much from individual to individual) response. In short: bravo! Your point, excellently, praiseworthily made as it is, is, after many other posts and thought-provoking articles I have taken the time (of which I sadly don’t have as much as I would like) to read, the one that has prompted me to sit back and, hands aflutter over the keyboard, attempt to construct an apposite, possibly worthy, and hopefully humorous (though what exactly “humour” is varies so much from individual to individual) response.

In short: bravo!

]]> By: jeremy rosenthal http://www.novelr.com/2008/06/02/how-to-write-long-sentences/comment-page-1#comment-2865 jeremy rosenthal Tue, 07 Oct 2008 20:58:51 +0000 http://www.novelr.com/?p=162#comment-2865 Thanks for the help, my teacher asked us to write a 100+ word sentence, so I'm really glad you gave the great advice on how to keep it coherent (putting subject and verb at the beginning and branching to the right). Sorry to do this, but two little things I noticed that I think could be fixed: 1)"so I do supposed" could be "so I do suppose" 2)"a whole chuck of text" could be "a whole chunk of text" (a chuck as a noun is a light tap.) Again, thanks for the help and for keeping your lesson concise! Thanks for the help, my teacher asked us to write a 100+ word sentence, so I’m really glad you gave the great advice on how to keep it coherent (putting subject and verb at the beginning and branching to the right).
Sorry to do this, but two little things I noticed that I think could be fixed:
1)”so I do supposed” could be “so I do suppose”
2)”a whole chuck of text” could be “a whole chunk of text” (a chuck as a noun is a light tap.)

Again, thanks for the help and for keeping your lesson concise!

]]> By: Eli James http://www.novelr.com/2008/06/02/how-to-write-long-sentences/comment-page-1#comment-2560 Eli James Tue, 03 Jun 2008 03:57:41 +0000 http://www.novelr.com/?p=162#comment-2560 Oh yes, Sonja. I like it too. =) Oh yes, Sonja. I like it too. =)

]]> By: Sonja Nitschke http://www.novelr.com/2008/06/02/how-to-write-long-sentences/comment-page-1#comment-2557 Sonja Nitschke Mon, 02 Jun 2008 17:15:18 +0000 http://www.novelr.com/?p=162#comment-2557 I like Dave Eggers' long sentence because I feel out of breath along with the narrator. Just makes me feel more closer to him. I like Dave Eggers’ long sentence because I feel out of breath along with the narrator. Just makes me feel more closer to him.

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